Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Glancing through the pages of a typical newspaper, we can bound to see that there is a myriad of columns written by people from all walks of life discussing the fairness of the large sum income earned by sports professionals. some suggest that the people who achieved a great success in sports are overpaid compared to other essential categories, while others frown upon this opinion as they think that it is the rewards of their hardness and contributions.
For a start, there is a belief that someone who works in a more crucial field should be paid more than the well-known sportsman. Since some occupations like accountants, polices and doctors are helping a country to adopt a smooth run, while people in sports did not contribute relatively large than the above jobs, some convinced that the compensation to sports professionals should be reduced.
In a sharp contrast, however, it seems to me that athletes fight for the country’s name at the expense of their health and time as well. it is undeniable that an athlete who had achieved a medal not only had put all his time on the practices and drills, but also have been suffering of various kinds of physical injuries. they facilitated a nation to win the glory and underpin the soft power of the country as well. it is cruel to obliterate the efforts they had poured by judging their contributions and citizens should appreciate them by giving certain approbation.
By and large, I firmly believe that every occupations have their own importance. we are not empowered to challenge their efforts. working in sports have given a lot of crucial things in the life, a great deal of money for them is fully justified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78754359707 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1666649053 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246740560901 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072880487935 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919176749204 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139104809594 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10748521546 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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