Nowadays, some celebrities such as film stars, sportsmen and pop musicians are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which jobs should be highly paid?
The high income of celebs is always a matter of dispute. While I agree with the statement that the celebrities are getting a large amount of money than other professionals, I also believe that the people of other professions who serve for the humanity and out society should be highly paid.
The entertainers and sportspersons are the highest earners of the society. The main reason behind it is that they serve their whole life to entertain and inspire us. Their piece of work is always an inspiration not only for our daily life, but also for the society. In addition to this, the sportspersons compete with the other participants of different countries to achieve fame and victory for their country. The life of the celebrities is more complex than the ordinary people. They are always followed by paparazzi, they have no privacy. To maintain their lifestyles and security, they are spending more bucks. So, above reason they should paid much money.
On the other hand, there are many other professionals who must be paid high amount of salaries. Doctors and nurses serve to save others life should be paid higher salaries. The teachers who spend their life to teach a nation for a brighter future, the researchers who spend their whole life for inventing or discovering cure of the diseases should deserve the highest amount of salaries. Besides this, the firefighters and police man who risk their life to safe people should have high salaries.
To sum up, although the celebrities are overpaid, I think that they deserve it because of their contributions in the society. I also believe that people of other professions who serve their life for the sake of humanity must be paid high remuneration.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, i think, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68824458534 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9392674188 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145603285956 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599051928726 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698690655353 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112071151825 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043711519769 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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