Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Parents play the most important role for the development of a child. Their proper guidance and caring help a child to grow up wisely. Every parents like to fulfill their children’s desire, whatever they like or whatever they want. However, fulfilling all the desire may bring negative consequences in their children’s later life. This essay will discuss why fulfilling all wishes of a child has negative effect in their later life.
Children have no proper ability to differentiate what is wrong and what is right. It is the most vital duty of a parent to give the proper education to their children about this issue. As children can not differentiate between the right and wrong, they try to do whatever they want or like. And fulfilling their all these desire may have many detrimental effect. For example, most of the children like to play video games, excessive playing of video games not only may effect on their health but also hamper on their study. So, parents should fix the time limit of playing video games for their children.
The parent’s who fulfill all the desire of their children, are leading them in many difficulties which will cause negative effect when they grow up. For instance, it makes their children dependance to others. As a result, in later life children faces many troubles to maintain their life properly. They fail to do most of their task without the help of others. In addition to this, because of the lack of self-reliability they always suffers from lack of confidence in making any decision alone. These are the most common problem of a children whose parent’s give them full independence from their childhood.
To sum up, although fulfilling all the desire of a child may show loving and caring behavior of a parent, it may cause several disadvantages to their children. Therefore, parents should fulfill their children’s wish in a control manner, otherwise it will suffer their children in later life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
... caring help a child to grow up wisely. Every parents like to fulfill their children&...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ive playing of video games not only may effect on their health but also hamper on thei...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'suffer'
Suggestion: suffer
...he lack of self-reliability they always suffers from lack of confidence in making any d...
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Line 5, column 539, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...e. These are the most common problem of a children whose parent's give them full inde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02134146341 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77231730384 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481707317073 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2491168897 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6842105263 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321023309491 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11974406453 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782676277792 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220134163056 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630643088108 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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