The chart below gives information about car ownership per household in the UK from 1975 to 2005

Essay topics:

The chart below gives information about car ownership per household in the UK from 1975 to 2005.

The line graph gives information about the percentage of people having their own car per household in the UK between 1975 to 2005.

Overall, it is clear that the proportion of human who has two and three cars rose during this period. however, car ownership does not use any cars fell in four years separated.

In 1975, the figure of owning two cars was fewer than 5% per household. Nonetheless, it increased significantly after 10 years, up to approximately 5%. From 1995 to 2005, the ratio of households using their own car continued to rise steadily to about 6% to 10% respectively. this increase was the same as three cars owners. between 1975 to 2005, the numbers were experienced an upward trend, about 8% to 14%, 15%, and nearly 20% respectively.

In contrast, almost 45% of the people had no car. however, this figure decreased dramatically for the following years, about 24% in 1985, and 20% at the end of the period. Meanwhile, there was approximately 45% of the car owners had one car; but this percentage declined significantly to about 38% before it went up remarkably to 45% again in 2005.

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Average: 8.4 (13 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82291666667 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80430906028 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1459039709 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36515065267 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1316609967 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11887055932 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235536999477 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131482171872 0.0819641961636 160% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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