The chart below gives information about global population percentages
and distribution of wealth by region.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given bar char delineates how the global population and the distribution of wealth is varied in 8 different countries.
Overall, North America reports highest global wealth whereas, Africa and India accounts the least. Moreover, in regards with population, China is the most populated country while, Rich Asia Pacific is least populated.
Among these 8 countries, North America has the highest range that is, 35 % and it subsequently decreases by 5 per cent for Europe(30 %) and further, for Rich Asia Pacific(25 %). Moreover, China and Other Asia Pacific consists of an equal amount of Wealth that is, roughly 4 per cent. The least amount approximately, 2 percent is equally recorded by India and Europe. However, the substantial number noted by Latin America and Caribbean is five times less than the Rich Asia Pacific.
On the other hand, in consideration with Population, Rich Asia Pacific has the least amount whereas, merely same with North America(5 per cent). Moreover, it differed by 5 percent consequently for Latin America and Caribbean(5 percent), Africa(10 percent) and Europe(15 percent approximately). It is crucial point to be observed is that India and Other Asia Pacific have 10 percent less than China's population. Likewise, China is the highest populated country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reports the highest'.
Suggestion: reports the highest
...nt countries. Overall, North America reports highest global wealth whereas, Africa and India...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or Latin America and Caribbean5 percent, Africa10 percent and Europe15 percent ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, likewise, moreover, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35643564356 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81111078454 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2899001475 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076340659825 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03941465904 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444541932636 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728816507556 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511019420444 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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