The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the most played sports in New Zealand in 2002. According to the information, the most popular sport for girls was netball, with almost 25% presence. The second favourite sport was swimming played by more than 20% girls. At the same time, boys were not so interested for netball, while in the swimming almost 15% of them were included.

As for boys activities, the diagram shows that soccer was the number one sport in 2002. Almost 25% of them were playing the soccer as opposed to girls who participated in soccer with 5%. In the second place, boys showed the biggest interest for other sports, different from those presented in the diagram.

The diagram also represents the relevant data for basketball, tennis, martial art, athletics and cricket. According to the data, tennis and basketball were almost of the same importance for both boys and girls with nearly 10% of them included. Martial arts were more preferred by boys, while the girls performed 5% interest in the same activity. However, the least number of girls played cricket (less than 1% percent) and the boys were the least interested for netball.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'as for', 'in the second place']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255605381166 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.121076233184 0.116061578633 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941704035874 0.0759168565197 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0538116591928 0.0366838410393 147% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0134529147982 0.0131127313244 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152466367713 0.155750635184 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0403587443946 0.0379272487307 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38878899763 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0134529147982 0.0210936926555 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116591928251 0.0948980150116 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00448430493274 0.00967000014798 46% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1132.0 1161.00487805 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.9 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92670157068 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340314136126 0.337110787985 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235602094241 0.247514529752 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167539267016 0.171178102325 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109947643979 0.112407865282 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38878899763 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513089005236 0.546246751206 94% => OK
Word variations: 43.9137220141 49.3433353143 89% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3636363636 23.0094962315 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.0983529184 42.9750493124 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.909090909 135.714022679 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 23.0094962315 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.689975730869 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 40.9238457877 47.7609492067 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.38095238095 2.94281807926 81% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446950677817 0.418131533498 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163695830566 0.181151798455 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686975038342 0.0850326197045 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.630625357128 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0767185966746 0.157042692854 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.24280579971 0.228904883108 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109745200467 0.108899403657 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.480680686045 0.367819155151 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0368218192789 0.0812612215331 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.354626682041 0.316326947829 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469277449316 0.0921553760075 51% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70731707317 216% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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