The chart below gives information about Someland s main exports in 2005 2015 and future projections for 2025

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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

The presented bar graph reveals the performance of Someland's primary exports between 2005 and 2015 as well as future anticipation for 2025.

Overall, over the given period, the dairy industry and international tourism are forecasted to undergo an upward trend in terms of exports, while there is a prediction that the export of meat products will decline gradually. In addition, international tourism is predicted to be the greatest export earner of Someland.

In 2005, with roughly $6.2 billion, international tourism accounted for the highest potion among Someland's main exports. This figure was followed by $5 billion and $4 billion earned by dairy and meat products in turns.

Over the next 20 years, the figure for international tourism climbed to approximately $6.5 billion in 2015, which was about $3.3 billion more than the revenue of meat products at the same time. After that, the earnings from international tourism is estimated to grow continuously and end up at a staggering $7.9 billion in 2025. Conversely, it is anticipated that the sale of meat products will witness a steep decline to $3 billion over the given period. The dairy industry, meanwhile, rocketed to $7.9 billion in 2015, but 10 years later, it will experience a slight drop to nearly $7.5 billion, according to the projections.

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Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, so, well, while, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20574162679 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93012885217 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3237742829 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173723347287 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844006904724 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941158112668 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138592010797 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992062517461 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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