The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.
The presented bar graph illustrates how much money was earned from Someland's top exports, namely meat products, dairy products and international tourism in 2005 and 2015.It also indicates future projection for 2025.Units are measured in billions of dollars for each product and service.
The most striking feature to be observed is that, there will be a downward trend in terms of the dairy product revenues, while the earnings from exporting meat products will be fluctuant trend over the given period. Besides, the international tourism will become dominant industry and occupy first place among others.
Looking at the data in more details, it is clear that in 2005, international tourism was the greatest exports of three industries, with revenue standing at just over $6 billion.After that, this figure rose remarkably to reach the point of almost $7 billion,in 2015. It is estimated that this growth will continue untill 2025 and hit the peak earning of around $8 billion for country. In 2005, dairy products was worth approximately $5 billion, but since then there had been a tremendous increase and sales for 2015 year reached to around $8 billion. Experts are predicting that exports in this area may fall slightly, so a figure of $7.5 billion is expected for 2025.
Meat products are the third key industry in Someland, but sales had dropped since 2005 and reached the point of around $3.5 billion.It is expected that sales will continue to decrease in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, look, may, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2194092827 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63131510628 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4957059661 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.625 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169123328359 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785648891836 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570402737752 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102892623355 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703392402676 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.