The bar chart shows the percentage of businesses that have social media presence

Essay topics:

The bar chart shows the percentage of businesses that have social media presence.

The presented bar graph reveals the proportion of corporations using social networking sites for business purposes over 4 years.

Overall, large, medium, and small companies' usage of social media all underwent an upward trend from 2012 to 2016. In addition, social media were most used by large firms over the given period.

In 2012, at a staggering 78%, the percentage of large businesses making use of social media was the highest. Meanwhile, medium and small firms made less use of social networking sites as these figures accounted for roughly 32% and 27% respectively.

Over the next two years, there was a slight drop of 2% in large corporations' usage of social media. Conversely, the proportion of medium and small firms using social networking sites for business purposes witnessed a steady increase to 48% and 35% in turns. After hitting the bottom at 55% in 2015, large companies' usage of social media suddenly surged to 79% in 2016. A similar trend was recorded in small and medium corporations, as these figures experienced a steep decline to 30% in 2015, then bounced back to around 50% at the end of the period.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (7 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...s. Overall, large, medium, and small companies usage of social media all underwent an ...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'corporations'' or 'corporation's'?
Suggestion: corporations'; corporation's
... there was a slight drop of 2% in large corporations usage of social media. Conversely, the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...itting the bottom at 55% in 2015, large companies usage of social media suddenly surged t...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99473684211 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63126840273 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547368421053 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.573929126 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.444444444 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205647344375 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101959938395 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608865636544 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145123071545 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175441742148 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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