The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The presented line graph reveals how many visitors traveling to a certain Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

Overall, the total number of visitors going to Caribbean island underwent a substantial increase over 7 years. In addition, there was a significant change in the figure for tourists staying on cruise ships.

In 2010, the Caribbean island attracted 1 million visitors in total, in which the majority of tourists opted to stay on the island as this figure accounted for approximately 0.75 million people. As compared to staying on the island, enjoying the visit on cruise ships was not popular at that time.

Over the next 5 years, the total number of people visiting this Caribbean island went up steeply to almost 2.75 million visitors. After witnessing a sharp rise between 2010 and 2015, the figure for tourists staying on cruise ships continued to rocket to 2 million at the end of the period. Meanwhile, the number of people spending the whole visit on the island rose gradually and reach about 1.5 million in 2017, after having met the figure for visitors staying on the island at 1.4 million people. At a staggering 3.5 million visitors, this Caribbean island's total number of visitors eventually end up at more than three times as many as its total of tourists in 2010.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92237442922 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52219355982 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511415525114 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7541829463 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308713344041 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145185839366 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515542241448 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207007511361 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431907103188 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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