The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The presented bar chart reveals the quantity of weekly free time taken by people according to genders and different employment situations in two years.

Overall, unemployed and retired men and women enjoyed the largest amount of spare time. In addition, the given number of hours spent on relaxation per week by men was always higher than that by women, while there was no data for males in the section of part-time workers and housewives.

The amount of leisure time enjoyed by jobless men was the highest figure in the chart with approximately 85 hours per week, followed by retired males with about 84 hours. Meanwhile, with roughly 79 hours, the unemployed and retired women bore a resemblance to each other in terms of weekly free time. Full-time male and female workers took the lowest quantity of spare time with only 43 and 38 hours per week respectively.

Regarding the other figures, the housewives spent 50 hours per week relaxing whereas the quantity of weekly leisure time taken by part-time female workers was lower, about 40 hours.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49907007498 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551136363636 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6427855711 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.714285714 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26224694383 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144226505327 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800248377064 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164707655302 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477339542034 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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