The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates the percentage of sports which were played by male and female of New Zealand in 2002. Overall, the uppermost of sports is netball that more than 25% women in that country played it. In contrast, the lowest percentages of sports also occurred in netball which just less than 5% males played it.

On the other hand, the second supreme percentages is soccer which it nearly 25% of men played it. Furthermore, swimming was positioned as the third rank that more than 20% woman learned it.

Moreover, while there are a significant gap between the number of male and female in cricket, athletics, martial arts, netball, soccer, swimming, as well as other sports, the number of male and female in basketball and tennis lean to balance nearly.

Finally, man had dominated in cricket, martial arts, basketball, tennis, soccer, and other sports while athletics, netball, and swimming were dominated by male.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'gaps'?
Suggestion: gaps
...Moreover, while there are a significant gap between the number of male and female i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, while, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11184210526 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5454235589 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.165509765 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5714285714 5.23603664747 316% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854782177361 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519990392055 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580506475809 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465021290223 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555015761857 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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