The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010
The bar chart describe about number of British people spending their money on charity percentagewise according to age in the years 1990 and 2010.
In the year 1990 people between age group 36-50 spend money about 42% which was highest amount spend.In 2010 it fell to 35%.People at age group of 18 -25 spend less money in the both year as 17% and 6 %.The age group of 51-65 spends 35% of money in the year 1990 and spend about 39% in the year 2010
In old age about group of > 65 people spend just above 30% of their money in 1990 while 35 % in 2010.Young age adult spend similar amount in 1990 as adults and below 25% in the year 2010
Overall,it can be seen that adults spend alot of money on charity than the teenager and young adults group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 616.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36879432624 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04370554595 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 22.4926829268 311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.5 43.030603864 536% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 308.0 112.824112599 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.5 22.9334400587 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301933178072 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.299089980152 0.103423049105 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501342903895 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21967621694 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10294456839 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.4 13.2329268293 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.73 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.3012195122 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.25 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 40.7170731707 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.9970731707 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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