Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some age group thinks that children's free time activities should be about their studies related else that time will be waste.while, I completely disagree with this opinion and think that free time should utilised by sports,arts and different activities rather than educational task.
First of all, playing sports in free time is good for children's mental and physical health as they fill more relax and calm.If they spend all the time in their educational activities they will lack in physical strength as they will keep their seating session for studies.playing one sport each day for an hour will make them relax.It will divert their mind in different sports.some children's might find the sports field to have a career in it.
Secondly,spending time with art and painting will provide children mental calmness as burden of studies is more.The time will be used by making master piece of paintings and art.Art will give different idea to them and expand those idea in different ways.For example,according to the survey of India the amount of children are interested in art and painting related fields than in the core subjects of education.So children's pastime should involve different types of arts and paintings.
In conclusion,I would say that spending time only in studies related activities will not help students instead free time should be utilized by different kinds of sports, and arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24778761062 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80139868627 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.134834633 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.5 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.5 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177026132855 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124235669328 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534847455632 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124235669328 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534847455632 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.1 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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