The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much

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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Given are pie charts providing information on the average rates of three different sorts of nutrients namely, sodium, saturated fats, and added sugar which are consumed by Americans in three main meals of a day, and also in snacks. Measures are shown in percentages.

A brief analysis of the figures reveals that while people in the USA consume equal amounts of sodium in breakfast and snacks, they eat the lowest percentage of added sugar in lunch and dinner.

To begin with sodium, approximately 43% of the figure goes on dinner meal which is the highest proportion of this element in comparison to other nutrients; besides, 29% of the chart formed by the lunch meal. Although half of the remaining 26% allocates to breakfast, the other half leads to snacks.

Regarding saturated fats, the most significant contribution of the chart, including 37% named for dinner. Where lunch and breakfast comprised almost 26% and 16% of the figure, respectively, the share of snacks is just over one-fifth of the whole (at precisely 21%).

For the remained chart, 42% of added sugar is eaten in snacks which is by far the highest rate compared to the three main meals. Even though dinner meals are responsible for 23% of this component, around 19% of it is consumed in lunch, remaining for 16% in breakfast.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, regarding, so, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93636363636 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65362297172 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5170651484 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149525695171 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576644974868 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617829021783 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081269692784 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491647374415 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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