the chart below show the distribution of the worlds water and use of water in three countries.

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the chart below show the distribution of the worlds water and use of water in three countries.

The pie chart provides data on world’s water separation in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada while bar chart gives information about water use in same countries.
Overall, it can be seen that while most water in Saudi Arabia and Egypt are used in Agriculture, in Canada is predominantly used in Industry. Fresh water mainly is consist of Ice and Glaciers and fresh water is account for minority of all water.
Looking at pie chart in more detail, it is evident that 97% of total water is salt water compared to only 3% which fresh water. Further, 21% of fresh water is consist of surface and ground water compared to 79% of fresh water.
Turning to the bar chart, it is clear that both Egypt and Saudi Arabia use almost 80% their water for agriculture in comparison to domestic usage and industry, which accounted for approximately 15% and 10%, respectively. In contrast, the percentage of water which used in Industry stood at 80%, compared to approximately 10% for agriculture and domestic.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71096708954 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3171512724 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399771683588 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218831114419 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755333364385 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273219083666 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727159319485 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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