The chart below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010

Essay topics:

The chart below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The bar graph shows six the most favourite films by genre, while the pie chart illustrates data how much money was earned by selling tickets in the USA in 2010.

Overall, the numbers for men were higher at five out of six types of the given films than that women's. Women only showed priority in the romantic comedy. As for the pie chart, the most significant revenue was taken from the ticket sales of the Action movies.

If we look at the details, it can be seen that Action movies were the most popular genre for men, at 50, and it was twice as high as Comedy. The numbers of women and western movies were the same. The romantic comedy films were the highest figure for women, at 30.

Another worth noticing point is that just under a half of takings were earned by Avtion movies. Almost a quarter of the revenue was taken from comedy, and it was two times higher than other types.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39393939394 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94312141793 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587878787879 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7417278546 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328712190413 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125616642756 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866915060329 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192669762052 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121196217416 0.0819641961636 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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