The chart below show the type of transports young people in four countries prefer to use Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart below show the type of transports young people in four countries prefer to use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about three means of transportation which are used by young people in four different countries.
Overall, the percentage of young people who use car is the highest in most of the countries except Germany. Besides, bicycle is also loved by young people at these countries.

There are 60% of young people using car in Great Britain, which is the same as that for USA. This figure is higher than that for Germany, with only 40% of commuters. However, France has the highest figure for car, at 75%. Around 30% of young people use motorcycle in USA, while there is only about 15% of people travel by motorcycle in other countries.

Bicycle is the most transport in Germany which attracts young people, with 45% of users. In contrast, USA and France have a similar figure for bicycle, at just 15% each.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (24 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76551724138 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43345685134 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6881788077 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.7777777778 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186018240517 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833263290408 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753521020603 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134924814638 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721153839438 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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