The given bar charts present the number of destinations that the UK graduates and postgraduates pursued after graduation in 2008, excluding full-time work. Overall, the number of graduate students was by far more than that of postgraduate students, while the proportions of destinations between the two groups of students were quite similar; the majority of them decided to study further, followed by doing part-time jobs, and then to be unemployed and lastly to do voluntary work.
Looking first at graduates' destinations, 29,665 of them decided to pursue further education, while approximately half of that decided to work part-time and not to get a job, 17,735 and 16,235, respectively. The number of the students who choosed to do voluntary work was very small; 3,500, which was just over 8 times smaller than that choosed to futher study.
Now turning to postgraduates' destinations. The most popular destination was still further education, whereas the number of students who worked part-time job was slightly less, 2,725 and 2,535, respectively. Moderate number of unemployed postgraduates was found at 1,625, while that of the students who did voluntary work was by far trivial (345) compared to other destinations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, look, still, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40104166667 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04276788713 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6465040542 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.142857143 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1967054549 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106323910177 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069742237689 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14296475267 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458405955651 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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