The given bar chart explains the amount spent on six different goods by Germany, Italy, France and Britain. Overall, Britain people spent more money on all six consumer goods as compared to other 3 countries. Britain spent more amount in photographic films.
Britain spent upto 170 thousand pounds on photographic films which is the highest as compared to all other consumer products. Germany is the least which spent on photographic films. Both France and Italy spent the same amount on toys.
Germany spent almost the exact amount for all the six goods.
France spent the lowest amount for personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes as compared to Italy. Italy spent more money on toys, cd's , tennis racquets and personal stereos than germany.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16393442623 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3483975914 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 65.0 106.607317073 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9649978882 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5555555556 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 5.23603664747 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211009611445 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105948468506 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533728888615 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14356123471 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564524044581 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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