The chart below shows the annual number of rental and sales in various formats of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the annual number of rental and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Given is the bar chart depicting the data of the type of films leased and sold during a period of 10 years, commencing from 2002.
Perceptibly, the figure of the rentals and VHS sales diminished while the reverse was true for the Blu-ray and DVD sales. Furthermore, movies in the DVD form was by far the most product purchase.
On the subject of the statistics of the rentals, commencing from more than 185,000 products, it plunged significantly to 95,000 in the 2011s. Conversely, the DVD sales reported a fairly small number at 49,000 in 2002 and then it reached a zenith of more than 215,000 in 2007, followed by a period of a slump to 190,000 in 2011.
Strikingly, the number of the VHS sales and Blu-ray sales reversed. The VHS sales were recorded at more than 85,000 product/s in the first year and then plummeted to 10,000 in 2005 before vanishing from the market.By the way, the Blu-ray sales’ record was documented for the first time at 1,000 in 2007; by contrast, it escalated moderately to 15,000 in 2011.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...n 2005 before vanishing from the market.By the way, the Blu-ray sales’ record was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, so, then, while, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67777777778 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58977095131 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3290735584 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12405607411 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644421347766 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401833784883 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783524954485 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255146690079 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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