The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors
and other workers in seven countries in 2004.
The bar chart compares the difference between the income every years for doctor and other workers in seven nations in the year 2004.
Overall, the annual pay in the Us for doctors and workers were higher than those in other countries.In all countries , doctors earned more than other workers.
Looking to the pay for doctors , the highest earning belonged to american doctors was 120 thousands while in finland doctors earned lowest earning with around 45 thousand dollars.The pay for doctors in switzerland and france were nearly similar with 70 thousand dollars.According to the bar chart , the total income that doctors earned in Italy Czech public and Germany were not nearly different with 60 63 and 61 thousand dollars respectively.
Looking to other workers, whereas the workers italy, czech public and germany made the same figure that was 20 thousand dollars ,workers in Us still made the highest with around 43 thousand dollars.The second highest was workers in switzerland with 40 thousand dollars and those in Finland and france made around 23 and 30 thousand dollars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17714285714 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58934528431 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491428571429 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.281916107 43.030603864 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.5 112.824112599 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.75 22.9334400587 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313746559905 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202046616013 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405951341512 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202046616013 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405951341512 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.2329268293 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.