The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004.

Given is the bar chart comparing yearly salary of doctors and other jobs in various nations in 2004.

On the one hand, medical practitioners earned by far more than other professionals in seven listed countries. In the US, Italy, Czech Republic, and Germany, annual pay for doctors was three times higher than that for other workers. Likewise, this figure was approximately two times in France and Finland, and 1.5 times in Switzerland.

On the other hand, doctors in the US received a much higher pay than those in other nations. Specifically, doctors from the North American country earned $120 thousand a year, compared to $50 thousand dollars for their counterparts in Finland, who received the lowest pay among reported nations. Meanwhile, France and Switzerland's doctors enjoyed the second highest pay of about $70 dollars annually. Strikingly, doctors in the remainder three countries were paid equally at around $60 thousand dollars per annum.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78633761151 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7283390678 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404520113578 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15682926963 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802766464591 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236221840504 0.15604864568 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729806690322 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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