The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year.
The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart represents various kinds of items and services purchased online by people in three different countries, Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom.
Overall, the people of the United Kingdom spent the largest amount of money in most categories which were, books, computer equipment, music, and DVDs/Videos except for toys and financial services.
As can be seen in the chart, the people of the United Kingdom contributed the most to the online sales figure of music which reached 68%, this percentage was much higher than other countries, Australia and Canada which accounted only about 38% and 35% respectively. Similarly, the United Kingdom also had the highest percentage for books which was 65% compared to Australia and Canada which percentage were exactly the same at 44%.
In two categories, toys and financial services, the amount of online consumers which come from the United Kingdom was beaten by the consumers from Australia and Canada. More specifically, in the UK only 18% of customers bought toys online and placed as second highest in the figure. Likewise, the UK spent only 5% on financial services and became the least that contributed to this category compared to other countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, second, similarly, so, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27835051546 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65441396302 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541237113402 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2286706975 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181410080955 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977006753086 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824811333877 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135357304873 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893479160335 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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