The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Essay topics:

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

The bar graph compares the worldwide sales of four different kinds of digital games in the years 2000 and 2006. units measured in dollars.

Overall, throughout the years all kinds of digital games except for console games experienced an upward trend. Handheld games consistently contributed the most to the sales throughout the period.

As can be seen in the chart, in 2000 the sales figure for handheld games was around 11 billion dollars and kept increasing to reach its peak at about 17 billion dollars in 2006. mobile phone games were the second most popular from 2000 to 2004 but this figure continued to drop to its lowest (around 5 billion dollars) in 2006.

Mobile phone games and online games both have similar growth. Online games replaced console games as the second most popular digital in both years 2005 and 2006.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Units
...gital games in the years 2000 and 2006. units measured in dollars. Overall, throug...
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Suggestion: Mobile
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9219858156 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24595495643 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1373920276 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382409215965 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165529857146 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119169426283 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234116696947 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091210047923 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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