The given bar graph compares the data about the job proportions of
man and woman in 6 different nations for 2 years, 1995 and 2005. It is cogent from this graph that occupation sector was dominated by male employees for these two years.
Overall, the employment rate had increased in 2005, as compared to 1995. In addition, the highest rate of employment was for 2005's male employees. Moreover, while x-axis represents these countries, percentage is indicated by y axis.
In 1995, the highest male employment rate was in Iceland with almost 70%, whereas Switzerland's female employment dominated woman's department with more than two-quarters. Furthermore, the maximum male and female employment difference was in New Zealand (Approximately 60% and close to a quarter), the lowest difference was observed in UK (just above two-quarters and around 50%).
In 2005, Iceland's male occupation rate was highest with more than 3 quarters, while three-fifths female were employed in Switzerland, which was highest. However, in Australia male employment rate was lowest for men's catagory with just below 70%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aph that occupation sector was dominated by male employees for these two years. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, whereas, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38728323699 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93549437081 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9320462915 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12134165985 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679583311103 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557976407749 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716529891259 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476210726571 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.