The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.

The graph illustrates information about different age groups of attendees at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland in December 2016 and December 2017.

Overall, it is immediately clear that the number of attendees at hospital emergency care departments increased moderately over the period. In addition, people aged 75 and over were always the highest number in both years, whereas the opposite was true for the group of children under 15.

Looking at the bar chart in detail, in December 2016, senior citizens sent to hospital emergency care departments were the largest, at around over 60 per 1000 population, which was followed by that of children under 5, a difference of 10. The figures for attendees who ranged from teenagers over 15 to old people under 75 were quite similar, at about 30 per 1000 population. Children under 15 had the lowest figure in this year.

One year later, the same order of these age groups of attendees was witnessed. Specifically, the figures for the elderly over 75 and children under 5 grew slightly by 5 per 1000 population. Finally, the numbers of the remaining age groups of attendees experienced a similar rise of approximately 2 per 1000 population.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1256281407 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85353695697 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547738693467 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9809840383 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348134549747 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15326597972 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156358216296 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260567154538 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176144448434 0.0819641961636 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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