The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the frequency with which Americans consume fast food at restaurants throughout ten years beginning in 2003.
They seemed to love this junk food on average once or twice a week to once or twice a month. However, the subjects of the chart will be split into two groups in this essay: those who occur frequently and those that occur infrequently.
To begin with, in the preceding group, the rate of individuals eating fast food every day in 2003 was relatively low (4 percent), but it was still greater than the rates in 2006 and 2013, which were very similar (3 percent ). Despite this, the ratio was considerably greater in the frequency of several times a week, approximately more than 4 times in 2003, about 6,6 times in 2006, and over 5 times in 2013. Lower the frequency a little, to once a week, and this group of people ate junk food with this frequency accounted for 31%, 33%, and 27% of the population in the three years indicated.
Despite this, the people who eat fast food once or twice a month had a proportion of 30%, 25%, and 33% in 2003, 2006, and 2013, respectively, which is identical to the preceding frequency group. Furthermore, there was a group that had the lower ratio "a few times a year," precisely, they are 2 percent, 10%, and 18 percent smaller. While the last group, who were known for eating fast food just once in a blue moon, had a recognition rate of 5%, 4%, and 4%, respectively, which was somewhat higher than the group who ate fast food every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, so, still, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59191176471 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53625379048 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.482926829268 1657% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5337018283 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.777777778 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13819972495 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668213286215 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429354452117 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976761794431 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329091532238 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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