In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be a case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
From the first step of developing the culture and the economy, humankind has come far than ever. As a consequence, many issues have to use been made including homeownership. To some people, this is not much indifferent between owning a home and paying an amount of money to live in a place that doesn't belong to you, but others, it matters.
The question "Why might this be a case?" may cause curiosity in many individuals about this problem. Almost all of the society have lived long enough to understand the meaning of the word "home". It is not only a place with some furniture but it also brings people the comfortable, the relaxation and the most important - the unforgettable memoirs. However, from my perspective, it is difficult for individuals to call their own homes without real estate certificates. This is nothing new and it has been like this for centuries. People will always want to decide what happens to them and for example, when you rent a house, you cannot paint it without asking for permission from the landlord.
If renting a house was the common situation of numerous folks, they would have lots of stressors in their life. A scratched wooden floor can cause you a headache and fatigue because it does not belong to you. The sofa you are sitting on and relaxing immediately might not be available as you wish, and maybe the owner no longer wants you to be the tenant anymore.
In another perspective, not owning a house could be an advantage cause it comes to finance. Additionally, paying a fee for different kinds of taxes such as real estate transfer tax, property tax,... as well as mortgage, take loans, and spending a huge amount of money on buying furniture and decorations will not be available. In fact, the people who rent a home would not be worried much when their houses are in danger of being destroyed by some disasters like floods, fire.
To be honest, I think everyone should buy themselves a home than renting it, to make it more special in their own way. If I had a chance to choose between owning a home and paying an amount of money to live in a place that doesn't belong to you, the first option would definitely be my choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71059431525 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70509428168 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6265340232 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.277777778 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340123671647 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928248501887 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645080242935 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171963049842 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579195387597 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.