Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Without a doubt, now everyone knows that living in a foreign land is able to be a cause of numerous severe social issues, including practical problems. From my view, I absolutely agree with this statement, however, there are various methods that people ought to apply to solve the issue.

Firstly, the popular social problem that is too obvious is the language barrier, meaning a person from another country may not understand and be capable to communicate with others. Thus, it creates next problems such as communication with people there. Furthermore, learning a new language is not something too bad whilst in some circumstances, a word does not mean that simple and it conveys an opposite meaning, which is known as slang or local language. For instance, China is a large nation divided into several cities, including Beijing and Guangdong. Despite they are Chinese territory, they do not communicate in one language. In fact, Guangdong residents seem to speak a totally different language from other parts of the country. This implies a controversial issue and misunderstanding in conversation.

Basically, moving to a new abroad nation causes practical problems such as finding a new job or purchasing groceries. However, foreigners may get some difficulties but they will learn that over time. Another worrying issue is the taken education may not academic value anymore. Additionally, a lack of knowledge skills provides challenges in looking for a new job. For example, a well-known case when a person gets an academic degree or essential work experience in his motherland, whereas in another country it is no longer valuable and he is only able to have a labor work as service staff.

To conclude, I have advice that people had better get a careful preparation before taking this case due to its help in solving numerous issues.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91622070824 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.644104359 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207811525099 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570661128625 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462387552589 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110337535423 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478891755658 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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