Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people supposed that it is important for children to learn decision-making, whereas others believe this will cause attitude issues when they become juveniles. However, I strongly agree making choices is crucial in every individual's life in day-to-day activities. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin, when children are given the freedom to make decisions in their lives at an early age, this would ultimately make them independent on their thinkings and never listen to the elders or others opinions who try to correct them when they are wrong. This accidentally causes a distance between their relationships. In Western countries, for example, parents always give their offsprings a chance to make decisions freely and it is often witnessed that they do not develop a close-knit relation with their family when they are matured. Moreover, they tend to grow an attitude of myself than caring about others.
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Furthermore, essentially, every single person needs to think out of the box than being a novice. Possibly, parents are able to let their offsprings be free in making choices and additionally, they are also enabled to correct their mistaken decisions. Thus, they will not only learn what is better for themselves but the society also. Some Asian families, for instance, are strict and never give their offsprings allowance to choose the food, living habits, or fashion styles due to their incorrectness in making decisions. Consequently, this not only affects their thinkings but also makes them ask for people's choices whenever and whatever they are doing even they are adults. Hence, it is crucial for individuals to be independent of others' thinkings as well as follow their own instincts.
To conclude, decision-making is the key lifestyle that has to be studied since childhood and cannot be taught by anybody. However, in some circumstances, children had better ask their parents for some advice whilst parents also need to learn to respect the decisions of their offsprings. Consequently, this will improve some worrying issues of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s better for themselves but the society also. Some Asian families, for instance, are...
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Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...independent of others thinkings as well as follow their own instincts. To conclude, de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2899408284 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85659122757 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8485129698 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285700340746 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904724146377 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607951409079 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166767672571 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539449997159 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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