The pie chart indicates the type of work that a university student of Anthropology did after receiving a diploma. Besides, the salaries of the aforementioned science graduates after half of the decade are also mentioned in the table.
Generally, after finishing their undergraduate qualification curriculum, the students tend to get a nine-to-five job, following that is a part-time position, unemployment, postgraduate study, or nameless, and finally part-time work together with graduate study. Furthermore, the income of each student after years of striving hard for the career.
After graduating, most of the students are employed in nine-to-five positions with a ratio of 52%, compared to 15% for the irregular job, and 12% unemployed. The option full-time postgrad study, categorized as unknown, as well as part-time work and postgrad study, seem not to be interested when their percentages are lower than 10%, specifically 8% along with 5% in turn.
Turning to the table, the types of employment mentioned also have 2 salaries, namely the low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ and above. The freelance consultants were employed with the total rate in the high pay scale of 80% ( 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+), and that in the low scale of 20%. Surprisingly, officers in the government sector also have the same rate with a small difference that they have 10% more employees having a salary greater than or equal to 100,000$. In contrast to them, workers of private companies only have 55% of the total rate in the high pay scale while the low and average income is 25% higher than them.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpared to 15% for the irregular job, and 12% unemployed. The option full-time pos...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
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..., namely the low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...e low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ an...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ and above. The freelance consultants we...
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... total rate in the high pay scale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+, and that i...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+, and that in the low scale of 20%. Sur...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...g a salary greater than or equal to 100,000$. In contrast to them, workers of privat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07913669065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92709403835 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4796928042 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163223613655 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075859605148 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743962015813 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128334163373 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972218009112 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mpared to 15% for the irregular job, and 12% unemployed. The option full-time pos...
^^
Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
..., namely the low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from...
^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...e low and average is from 25,000$ to 74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ an...
^^^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...74,999$, as well as the high is from 75,000$ and above. The freelance consultants we...
^^^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... total rate in the high pay scale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,...
^^
Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ale of 80% 40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+...
^^^^
Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$999'.
Suggestion: $999
...40% at the level between 75,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+, and that i...
^^^^
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...,000$ and 99,999$, 40% at the level 100,000$+, and that in the low scale of 20%. Sur...
^^^^
Line 7, column 554, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...g a salary greater than or equal to 100,000$. In contrast to them, workers of privat...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 278.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07913669065 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92709403835 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4796928042 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.2 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163223613655 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075859605148 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743962015813 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128334163373 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972218009112 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.