The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013

Essay topics:

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The bar chart compare the six categories of American people who have meals in fast food restaurants between 2003and 2013.
It is clear that the frequecies for "once a week" and "once or twice a month"are the major chices for Americans who have meals out of home. The percentages for "eating outside everday"and "never did so" remained stable over the ten years for concerned.
In 2003,17% of American people chose to visit fast food restaurant several times a week,which was just half as much as the figures for their counterparts who did so once a week and once or twice a month(31% and 30% respectively).
2006 saw an increase in the percentages of several times a week (nearly 5%)and once a week in restaurants (reaching its peak at 33%), but witnessed a drop of almost 8% in the number of once or twice a month . In 2013, Americans' most frequent pattern to restaurant was once or twice a month at about 33% while the figures for several times a week and once a week were reduced by nearly 5%.
With regard to other three frequencies,the perentagesof "Never" and "Every Day"were all less than 5% during the whole ten years. As for the figure of "a few times a year",it was about 13% at first in 2003 and remained stable at 15 % in the rest period.

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Average: 7.6 (4 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, while, as for, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85333333333 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1241152758 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.1761193852 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112836366485 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721075744369 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992969598719 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103392026562 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111973770639 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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