The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart compares the USA people's frequency of eating at fast-food restaurants from 2003 to 2013.

Overall, it is clear that over the years, while most people in the USA chose to eat at fast-food restaurants once a week, the percentage of people who ate at such places daily is the lowest among all categories.

In 2003, over 30% of people in the USA went to such restaurants once a week. This figure grew by nearly 3% in the following three years, but then fall significantly to only 28% at the end of the period. Also, the percentage of those who ate in fast food restaurants several times a week shared the same trend, increasing from 17% in 2003 to 20% in 2006 and dropping to 16% in 2013. Nevertheless, people who ate at these places at least once a month made up to 30% of the USA people in 2003 and reached a peak of 33% in 2013 despite a dramatic decline to 25% in 2006.

In contrast, there were approximately 4% of people in the USA eating at fast-food restaurants every day in 2003; however, this figure then dropped by 1% in the next three years and stayed unchanged until 2013. Similarly, the percentage of people who never ate at fast-food restaurants decreased from 5% in 2003 to 4% in 2006 and stayed stable until 2013. The opposite trend was witnessed in the percentage of people who only eat at such restaurants a few times a year, increasing from 13% in 2003 to 15% in 2006 and remained steady until 2013.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 2006 and remained steady until 2013.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, while, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38345864662 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52817242911 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3824567722 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.555555556 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254336932134 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146134742825 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706351261264 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202712373477 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450087204847 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 2006 and remained steady until 2013.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, while, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments