The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year

Essay topics:

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuck county at different times of the year.

The table interprets the data of varieties of birds species in Woodchuck region at different periods.

There are some birds, which are active not only during summer, but also winter period, such as: Cardinals, Crows and Woodpeckers. However, The prevailing fowls are found energetic only during one season, either summer or winter. The only bird which caught merely in winter is Juncos; the only exotic winter bird in Woodchuck district.

The remainders of the group, such as: Bluebirds, Mockingbirds; Orioles, and Vireos, need a dry and warm habitat. Therefore, these fowls are merely found in summer. This characteristic is not a special ability among the birds species in the aforementioned area.

To conclude, Every birds has its own favorable habitat condition. The prevailing of fowls are active during summer period. However, the observation shows the opposing data for the one which is vibrant only in winter, and the others can be found lively during both condition.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...stic is not a special ability among the birds species in the aforementioned area. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3141025641 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69879407896 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2590482335 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13735315179 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575705251733 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848844655938 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111921744679 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101836148971 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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