The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The line graph compares the percentage of Japanese population in three different groups during the period between 1960 to 2040.
In general, people aged 15-64 accounted for the highest proportion of the total population. While the percentage of elder people in this country increase over the period, the opposite was true for the other two groups.
According to the graph, the percentage of people aged 15-64 stood at 65%, over 6 times as much as that of the elder group in 1960. In the following 30 years, the figures for the elder group increased gradually to 10% while the number of working ages fluctuated slightly around 70%. After that, this number of the elder people increase dramatically to 35% in 2040, compared to the percentage of working-aged decrease rapidly to approximately 50% until 2030 before that rising steadily to 55% at the end of the period.
By contrast, 30% of the people aged 0-14 rose moderately in 1960, this number rose moderately by 5% in ten years later. From 1970 to 1990, the percentage of Japanese population fluctuated slightly after that falling suddenly to 10% in 2040 during the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95263157895 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6212481432 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1214055857 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152937656499 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765558403381 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486195970231 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107295315904 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535651217665 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.