The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years

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The chart below shows the number of films produced five countries in three years

The bar chart illustrates how many films were manufactured in five different nations over the course of three years starting from 2007.

Looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that Country A had the highest quantity of films produced. Noticeably, while there was a slight decline in the number of movies made in country A and D, the opposite was true for those of country B, C and E.

In 2007, A was the leading country in film production with more than 85 films, about seven times higher than that of country D. However, the amount of film created in the area A remained relatively unchanged, the figures for nation D decreased to nearly 10 films in 2008. In the next year, the number of films generated fell down to 80 movies in country A. Meanwhile, region D witnessed a trivial increase to around 11 films.

Regarding the other three countries, the upward trend could be seen in them. Between 2007 and 2009, the amount of movie made by nation B rose rapidly to 70 films. Similarly, despite having a rise but the growth in area C and E were not significant, climbed just from under 10 to 18 and 9 to 11, respectively.

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Average: 8.1 (3 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, regarding, similarly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54146341463 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58819909183 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9125391767 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277431803729 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970191376983 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863360058628 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157921267396 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797448948148 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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