The given bar graph depicts the information about using of internet between 2003 and 2006 in Great Britain
Add fleeting glance it was apparently clear in 2003 and 2004 they showed is same percentage in 2005 the figure increases gradually to 100% and decreases to 90% in next year and the percentage grew in 25 to 44 age group. In 25 to 44 age group there was a significant growth from 55 % to 80% from 2003 to 2006.
Furthermore similar trend was seen in the age group 45 to 54 from 60 to 80% over the four year period as far as the other two groups although the percentage had a minor fluctuation. The Overall trend was upword.
To wrap up the over 65s the least percentage of internet users. the main user of Internet for young adults aged between 16 to 24 years
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and 2004 they showed is same percentage in 2005 the figure increases gradually t...
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... from 55 % to 80% from 2003 to 2006. Furthermore similar trend was seen in the age group...
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...four year period as far as the other two groups although the percentage had a min...
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...d a minor fluctuation. The Overall trend was upword. To wrap up the over 65s t...
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...the least percentage of internet users. the main user of Internet for young adults ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42407661668 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.069284748 43.030603864 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32694232478 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142507292574 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846891486726 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174966049816 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494211813911 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.