the chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used internet everyday from 2003-2006.
The bar chart elucidates the information about the proportion of adults of various age groups using internet on daily basis in great britain in the year of 2003 to 2006.
overall,the adults of early age represented the maximum utilization of internet in great britain.
By scrutinizing the data, it is evident that main users of internet were young adults of age 16 to 24 and they shared same space of 80% in first two years and reached at peak point of 100% in 2005 however it slumped to 90% in next year.Age group of 25 to 44 showed an upward trend from 50% to 80% during the given period of time.
By analyzing further,user of internet of age 45 to 54 were grew with time from 60% to 80% . Although the figure for age group 55 to 64 had some fluctuations but it had escalated up to 50% in 2006.The next group of age 65+ had also shown an upward trend in 2006.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35582822086 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46962511034 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613496932515 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8463744138 43.030603864 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299503488313 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160769557195 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704948914108 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183019409695 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714345785022 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.