The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006

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The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

The barchat compares changes in the proportion of overseas students in university graduates in eight Canadia provinces in the years of 2001 and 2006.

Overall, the percentage of international graduates increased in all parts of Canada during the 6-year period, with the biggest rise taking place in British Columbia. New Brunswick's proportion of international students were the highest in in each year, while the reverse is true for Ontario.

In 2001, New Brunswick had the highest percentage of international graduates at around 7%, followed closely by Nova Scotia and Quebec with around 6% each. In contrast, the figures for the other five Canadian provinces were lower (under 5%), with Alberta and British Columbia sharing a relatively higher level (around 4%) and Ontario being the lowest (about 3%).

In 2006, New Brunswich's proportion of overseas graduates almost doubled to close to 13% which continued to be the highest. Notably, the share of international graduate students in British Columbia soared to approximately 11% in 2006, which catched up that in Nova Scotia inthe same year to became the second highest. The proportion of international student in other parts of Canadia also saw upward trends, with figures reaching to aprroximately 6.5% .

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Average: 5.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36868686869 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87096118413 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5124971604 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.875 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259162782368 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119779473113 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720617011131 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178495864745 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700882529296 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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