The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compare the number of rented and owned houses in two different countries from 1920 to 2015.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that people used to rent houses rather than buying them but after 1972, they started to buy more houses and owned that properties.

For the households which lived in an owned accommodation had, the trends seem to be upward from which it started only at above 20% and rose gradually since then reaching up to nearly 90%.While its percentage dropped down quite a bit after 2000,it is more numerous if compared to the rented ones.

Meanwhile the households which are being rented experience a downward trend. The way in which the trend decreased is quite similar to the other graph but in the end of the year, the percentage increased rather than decreasing like the other figures. In detail it started at 78% which then fall down as time went, where it even reach the same percentage count than that of the owned one and hit its lowest in 2000 with only slightly higher than 30% and had been gradually increased after that.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ly since then reaching up to nearly 90%.While its percentage dropped down quite a bit...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...rous if compared to the rented ones. Meanwhile the households which are being rented e...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reaches'?
Suggestion: reaches
...n fall down as time went, where it even reach the same percentage count than that of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71276595745 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30394685663 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0192567871 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116275511593 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639534924508 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257689197264 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749200252564 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198041203646 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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