It is predicted that, more people will start to read from electronic-book and printed book and newspapers became obsolete. I completely disagree with the above statement for two main reasons
First of all, it is wrong to say that printed books would become less popular as they are considered to be the purest form of literature. Furthermore, there are a more probable chance of people who do not own phones or other technologies means to get more contact with the current situation in the world, especially for poorer countries. Also, it is a better option for the elders as they cannot keep in touch with this advancement and felt more comfortable when reading.
Another reason is while these e-books are free in price, it costed people huge problems relating to their mentality. Long exposure to radiations from mobile phones or computer screens can lead to dizziness and tiredness in eyes. If the part is not rested or recovered properly, it could cause near-sightedness, even in some worse cases, total blindness. One study even found out that, reading e-book in the dark with blanket on have more chance of damaging our eyes more than reading printed books and since countries like Uganda are depleted in proper light source at nighttime, it is no doubt which option will benefited them more.
In conclusion, since printed books are still relevant in today’s world and they have more advantages than the electronic type in many ways, I cannot agree with this point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...f people who do not own phones or other technologies means to get more contact with the curr...
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Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...ttime, it is no doubt which option will benefited them more. In conclusion, since prin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.972 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65272388311 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8640263379 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.111111111 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224502434858 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861484080383 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068788842061 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148728208514 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449261999783 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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