The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The above bar graph gives information about the amount of both owned and rented residential places in England and Wales in the specific period of time from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, it is clear that although the demands for owned buildings increased during this time, the number of individuals who desired to own renting places declined noticeably.
In 1918, percentage of families with rented constructions were at the highest records of the whole graph with near 80. On the other hand, only 22% of humans were living in owned ones. Both 1939 and 1953 witnessed a small alteration, with a slight increase in owned records to more than 30% and a gradual decline in rented ones to almost 70%. Afterwards, the process continued where rented and owned accommodation for people reached the same proportion of 50 in 1971.
In addition, in the following years, the owned records were always higher than rented ones particularly in 2001 when owned statistic hit the peak with near 70%. Meanwhile, in the mentioned year, the amount of rented buildings were at its lowest proportion with 30%. At the end, rented and owned procedures ended up with approximately 35% and 63% respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00507614213 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68156787277 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598984771574 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1355472876 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239672489794 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100637547742 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537230688128 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152945563482 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526512019269 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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