Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer why airplanes have been one of the most important vehicles in human’s life.
During people’s lives especially after improving their technology and ability to build various facilities for themselves, lots of vehicles have been produced which have changed the world noticeably. However, airplanes have brought the most considerable alteration to human’s lives. There are several reasons why I myself argue that they are more significant that others which will be explained later.
To commence with, several reasons have propelled airplanes to be the most important development through these years for some individuals. First one is the possibility which it has brought to people’s life in order to visit other countries. For example, travelling from japan to America which is the furthest destination has now been fulfilment. Moreover, it has given individuals more opportunities to go overseas not only to study, but also to work with being able of coming back to their own country anytime they desire.
In addition, despite for each citizen, it has gained companies many benefits. In fact, by airplanes, companies have changed to be international and exported their goods all around the world. As a result, they could be able to expand their business and made a profit. Furthermore, by growing corporations, more and more employees have been hired. This means many governments have obtained a great deal of money by being connected to other countries. Consequently, throughout the world, economic would be in better circumstance.
In conclusion, based on writer’s opinion, having more connection with individuals and companies all around the world could be mentioned as two considerable reasons for this issue. Therefore, airplanes have been the most important victory for humans after industrial revolution.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55805243446 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9797956174 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5831614031 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212905681863 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760357772735 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779969172054 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147099243324 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587616389267 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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