At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large numbers of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in several societies the average number of youngsters has been more than the old ones. This circumstance have had both benefits and drawbacks for governments. Regarding to all the aspects, I myself believe the advantages definitely compensate the negative points.
To commence with, owning high proportion of young people in countries, has had considerable worthy impacts. The main on is having large quantity of work forces. In other words, there have been various young individuals who have been studying academic courses which would be practical in order to use them in diverse portions. As a result, industrial part of countries would be in better condition by utilizing youngsters’ skills and abilities. Consequently, the whole societies would obtain several benefits such as better economic condition.
On the other hand, if one society had large number of young people rather than old ones, it would confront some difficulties. Providing sufficient amenities for all the youngsters form their childhood until their adult life has been one of the significant one. For instance, satisfying educational system which would require great contribution of professional teachers who have requested valuable payments has been among those facilities. Moreover, preparing all their companies in order to hire number of graduates in their business has been another difficulty for governors. This issue has propelled authorities to have some problems in supplying the appropriate condition for all of them.
In conclusion, including more number of young people among countries’ population has had some drawbacks such as the societies’ preparation for provide all the possible needs for them. Despite all of them, I think it has been more beneficial to use them in industry in order to improve their economy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51071428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95677835918 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3609954611 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15499919784 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553104010728 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576113583319 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995733803151 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250719936644 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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