The bar graph represents the amount of owner and renter of accommodation in England and Wales during a period of time (1918 to 2011).
Overall, accommodation owner amount decreased dramatically during 1918 to 2001 whereas the rate of tenants increased significantly during the same time.
With regard to time, home with own accommodation had a highest share in 1918 during 1918 to 2011 with 80% despite the accommodation renters amount which had minimum value over these years, about 20%. Then the market shares of accommodation owners and renters changed in opposite sides during this period of time so that the tenants had a growth trend in contrast to downward trend of the owners. As a result, they reached a same market share in 1971 with 50% share for each of them and this trend continued until 2001. consequently, home with rent accommodation had lowest rate with 25% approximately while house with own facilities had its maximum range around 65% in this year.
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 78
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 56
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...mmodation in England and Wales during a period of time 1918 to 2011. Overall, accommodation o...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...o time, home with own accommodation had a highest share in 1918 during 1918 to 20...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s changed in opposite sides during this period of time so that the tenants had a growth trend ...
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Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
...em and this trend continued until 2001. consequently, home with rent accommodation had lowes...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...sequently, home with rent accommodation had lowest rate with 25% approximately while house...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99382716049 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76742239886 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.1399877984 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 5.23603664747 318% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114534550773 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678230698866 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550957257594 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986504825243 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481254434228 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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