The bar chart compares proportions of households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.From the data supplied, it is conspicuous that owners showed a steady, but generally rose dramatically over the period, while percentage of rented households saw a significant decrease.
The amount of tenants was about 77% (that was the highest per cent throughout the period) in 1918, being higher than owners by nearly 60%. It decreased to approximately 68% in 1939 and remained the same until 1953. In the mid way of both trends, the year 1971 equalized the percentage to 50% for both types of accommodation. Then percentage of leased households continued falling moderately until 2001, followed by a slight increase to 35% in the end of the period. Meanwhile, proportion of owned dwellings was 20% in 1918, rising to around 31% in 1939. After increasing slightly, it remained stable and again went up dramatically to under 70% in 1991. In 2001, The number of acquired accommodations were higher than rented households by 40%. Since then, owned households saw a marginal decline to 63% over the period.
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what do u think Opinion?
what do u think
Opinion?
It is a good one.
It is a good one.
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Thanks! I appreciate)
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
... in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.From the data supplied, it is conspicuous th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08648648649 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95847077154 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5738279382 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211163237987 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722943781346 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838812040407 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199337785111 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892265506721 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.