The line graph illustrates the number of viewers of news channel in four different times at 1 p.m, 6p.m, 9:30 p.m and 11 p.m during the year. The spectators of 6 p.m, 9:30 p.m and 11 p.m news showed a volatility, but generally fell over the period, while the numbers of viewers who watched at 1 p.m remained the almost same.
In January, the proportion of onlookers at 6 p.m and 9:30 p.m were nearly 5 million and 3 million respectively. The figure of showed news at 9:30 p.m rose slightly to 3.8 million, followed by a dramatic decrease to 1 million in August. After taking a nosedive, the watchers of news at 9:30 p.m enjoyed a sudden jump to around 2.5 million and continued growing marginally to 3 million over the year. Meanwhile, the spectators of news channel started the year with a significant fall from nearly 5 million to 4 million. While the figures fluctuated wildly, it touched the lowest point to approximately 3.5 million in August. Thereafter, it increased gradually one month and declined in December.
The numbers of news watchers stayed roughly the same around 1.2 million from the beginning of year to October and went up negligibly over the period. The other news channel which created in May got quick popularity over the viewers and rocketed from none to 4 million in August. Then, new channel experienced a considerable decline to 1 million in the end of the year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...se to 1 million in August. After taking a nosedive, the watchers of news at 9:30 p.m enjoy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7131147541 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72836336943 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8510149585 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162963749973 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724155238099 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470576352603 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118262189348 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298582143998 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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