The chart below shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries
from 1950 to 2000, with projections till 2050. Summarise the information by selecting
and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given column graph compares the amount of money spent by five age groups of the
British citizens on three different items, in the year 2004. It is interesting to note that the
spending on food and drinks was the least by the under 30s, and the highest by the above 76
age group.
It is noticeable that the largest proportion of spending went on food and drinks in most age
groups, except for the under 30s and those between 61 and 75 years of age. Expenditure on
restaurant and hotel was almost similar among all age groups below 60 years. They spent 12-
14% on this sector. The 61-75 and the 76+ age groups spent 2% and 7% respectively on
restaurant and hotel. The under 45s spent lesser on entertainment than on restaurant and
hotel, but the vice versa was true for all the other given age groups. The 61-75 year olds,
showed the highest discrepancy in their spending on these two areas. They spent 2% and
23% on restaurant and hotel, and entertainment respectively.
Overall, it is observed that as age advanced, the spending priorities of people changed.
Older age groups spent more on food and drink and entertainment. However, the 76+ age
group did not give much importance to entertainment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of money spent by five age groups of the British citizens on three different item...
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...2004. It is interesting to note that the spending on food and drinks was the leas...
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...der 30s, and the highest by the above 76 age group. It is noticeable tha...
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Suggestion: Age
...30s, and the highest by the above 76 age group. It is noticeable that t...
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...e highest by the above 76 age group. It is noticeable that the largest propor...
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...ding went on food and drinks in most age groups, except for the under 30s and tho...
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... went on food and drinks in most age groups, except for the under 30s and those bet...
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...n 61 and 75 years of age. Expenditure on restaurant and hotel was almost similar ...
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... and 75 years of age. Expenditure on restaurant and hotel was almost similar among all ...
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...e groups spent 2% and 7% respectively on restaurant and hotel. The under 45s spen...
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...oups spent 2% and 7% respectively on restaurant and hotel. The under 45s spent lesser o...
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... on entertainment than on restaurant and hotel, but the vice versa was true for a...
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...entertainment than on restaurant and hotel, but the vice versa was true for all th...
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...r given age groups. The 61-75 year olds, showed the highest discrepancy in their ...
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...ng on these two areas. They spent 2% and 23% on restaurant and hotel, and enterta...
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... hotel, and entertainment respectively. Overall, it is observed that as age adva...
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... and entertainment. However, the 76+ age group did not give much importance to en...
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... entertainment. However, the 76+ age group did not give much importance to enterta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63012220545 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8799272556 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.010224956329 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00482463531713 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0107910211154 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00420210806586 0.15604864568 3% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103593399676 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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