The chart below shows the result of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The above line graph gives information about the Australian citizens’ routines of purchasing and consuming both coffee and tea in diverse towns in last 4 weeks which was obtained from one questionnaire’s outcomes.
Overall, it is clear that in all cities, people had preference to drink their coffee in cafes, except Adelaide where the greater numbers were allocated to buying instant coffee.
In Sydney, more than 60% of residents were interested in going to café in the last 4 weeks, meanwhile approximately average 45% bought fresh or instant coffee. The other city, Melbourne, similarly people tended to drink their coffee in coffee shops which was the highest percentage on the whole graph with near 65%.
Brisbane witnessed the fewer number of people who went to café with less than 35%. On the other hand, buying instant coffee by their residents had a noticeable increase to almost 53%. As it was mentioned, only in Adelaide, people were fond of buying instant coffee more than drinking it in café with a slight difference of 1 percent with instant coffee. In the last town, Hobart, the records were roughly like Sydney, but with some steady increase in statistic of buying instant coffee to near 55%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, while, on the whole, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0495049505 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59853366688 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9429280349 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182462340711 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084374230972 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438084917099 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115656908199 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159008075875 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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